I, JURY

Reading my peers' essays have helped me find a few things about my own writing.  First of all, an expanded vocabulary in some areas of my writing could prove useful when attempting to convey my thoughts in a more professional way to the AP test graders.  Second, my structure could use some work.  I have trouble transitioning from my thesis statement to my supporting evidence in the body paragraphs.  Lastly, I should avoid making generalizations.  Being specific will prove to be vital once again.